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Gunmetal Rage Chapter 1 by ~DragonGir1234:iconDragonGir1234:



"Aurora, we have to keep the OCs in line." Rya Uchiha stated.
"I know, but don't you think they deserve a little freedom? Seriously." The female dog crossed her arms.
"If we give them anymore freedom than they already have, one of them will die."
"I doubt that..."
"Look..." The puppet master sqeezed the bridge of her nose. "We just need to look after them, or else something bad will happen."
"Like wha-" Aurora was cut off with the sound of a gunshot. She looked at Rya for a split second, then bolted to where the others were, Rya at her heels.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Earlier~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Jasper Ichimo, a demonic angel, and Zen, a brown stitched wolf, had been in a pointless fist fight for hours.
"Guys...knock it off..." Sora, a Sonic world character, groaned. "I'll shoot both of you."
"Oh please..." Lyara, a Zelda character, commented. "You don't have the heart to do that." She grinned.
"Buraki...can you stop JazzJazz and Zen?" Isabelle, a fallen angel, asked.
Slowly, a giant Yin Yang moster staggered up to his feet. "Very well..." He took a deep breath, and roared loudly.
Jasper and Zen froze in an awkward position, quickly getting away from each other.
"Why do you two fight all the time?" Shadow, a male neko, complained.
"Ahdfbjsfksdhjfgksdfgdfjvskfh!!!" Thy both shouted jibberish at the same time, so you couldn't understand them at all.
"Just one of you talk!" Kai, a female kitsune, shouted.
"Rgh..." Zen transformed into his human state. "Why should we?" He looked at Isabelle. (Isabelle has been a main target for Zen to destroy, and sadly, Jasper fell in love with her) He casually walked over to her.
"Hey! Zen, you better not touch her!" Jasper started towards him.
Before he could reach the werewolf, Zen had put Isabelle in a tight armbar. Right in that position where you can't move a single muscle.
"Agh!" Izzy cried in pain.
Jasper rammed into Zen, tackling him to the ground, then pinning him into the cold floor. "I said...Don't. Touch. Her." He seethed.
"Okay...whatever." Zen calmly said, while at the same time, slowly reaching for Sora's gun belt.
"HEY WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING, RUNT?!?!?!" She shouted, but it was too late. Zen had gotten her German pistol.
"Target practice." Zen said. He aimed for Jasper's head, but the angel moved out of the way just in time, and took to the air. Zen immediatly started to aim for Jasper, but not shooting. He tried leading his aim, but was unsuccessful. Then, he fired once when he thought he had a good aim, but missed by a long shot.
"Ha! Zen, you couldn't hit a dead whale if you tried!" Jasper called to him. He turned around, hovering in the air, and started to laugh hysterically.
"Rgh..." Zen's temper skyrocketed. He aimed for Jasper's head, and fired. A loud gunshot echoed through the room. The bullet actually went through Jasper's lung. He stayed airborne not a second more, he plummeted to the ground, unconcious.

And potentially dead.
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Author's Comments

This was a story I did a while ago. Enjoi. XD

Note - It's a story about all my OCs, so don't expect to understand most of the characters. If you don't, just ask me.

All my OCs (c) Me, myself, and I

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:iconinkyster:
Epicness! I like it. It's a great plot and story.

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Thanks! Like I put in the comments, if you have any questions about my characters, just ask. Oh, and thanks for the fav!

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Welcome ^-^

Okay ^-^

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Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee soooooo wassup?

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"IT'S CALLED A DOOR YOU IDIOT!!!!" -Me

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XD
Not much, planning cosplays, drawing, being forced to write fanfiction by Zil, the usual. You?

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Workin on the second chapter of Gunmetal. Waitin for Jess to wake up. (Im at a sleepover.)

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Oh cool! XD Niiiice. She takes forever to wake up.

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Yeah no kidding. THE SECOND CHAPTER IS UP!!!!!

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XD When she slept over my house once she wouldn't even wake up when Kayla threw pillows at her. XD WOOOO!!! *is going to go read once done with watching yaoi*

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Yay! I hope you likes it! There's blooooooooooooooood.

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